following the requirement and read the documents, I provided

following the requirement and read the documents, I provided the example how to write this short-paper and what I did my draft 1, but my own is not good. So I need you help me write a new one. My professor common my essay:’ There are several significant issues with this paper. There isn’t a dedicated presentation of the function argument. What are the claims/premises, and how do they lead to the conclusion? Some of the general ideas appear in this paper, but we need a careful step-by-step reconstruction of the argument. The paper does not technically complete the assignment because it is lacking in a presentation an objection to the function argument. As such, the paper cannot receive a passing grade. There are also serious issues with the writing, so we should discuss whether this course is the right fit for you.”