I need someones help to proof read my paper and fix the gra

I need someone’s help to proof read my paper and fix the grammatical errors, anything that looks wrong with essay, please fix it. It needs to look like a college level essay. Also I just need one more page of experience you had a live concert which is considered presentational in Thomas Turino’s . You just basically have to describe how it made you feel using somewhat music terms. The deatiled instruction are attached.